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Second Hand Pat
10-29-2016, 06:00 PM
Took this image with Stan at the St. Augustine Gator Farm. I post-processed from the raw file again since I have learned alot since I last touched this image. I would love any suggestions for improvement. :)

https://c8.staticflickr.com/6/5524/30559912071_51c338e639_b.jpg (https://flic.kr/p/NytxaH)DSC_2543-2 (https://flic.kr/p/NytxaH)

D7000
80.0-400.0 mm
F/7.1
ISO 400
SS 1/1000
Second Hand Pat
10-30-2016, 08:01 PM
With Ricardo's assistance I used photoshop to move the left-most branch towards the center of the image for a better overall composition.

https://c4.staticflickr.com/6/5466/30587033091_fd31e8be88_b.jpg (https://flic.kr/p/NASxiv)DSC_2543-Edit (https://flic.kr/p/NASxiv)
rickztahone
10-31-2016, 11:35 AM
As I said via text. I really like the new composition a lot better. Great work Pat.
Second Hand Pat
10-31-2016, 01:01 PM
As I said via text. I really like the new composition a lot better. Great work Pat.

Thanks for the assist Ricardo, really appreciate it :D
Pat
SMB2
11-04-2016, 11:17 AM
Love the wing position and the "dynamic" feet. Also love the soft lighting.
If I were to print this, I would clone out the leaves at the bottom left and the twig bottom center. Just cleans it up a bit. Might also lighten up the Spoonbill head a tad. (Hard to tell, it may be different on your monitor.)