Don't really need to attach all the EXIF data. Just camera make and basic settings.
Posting a slightly larger JPEG image would help as well. 1200 pixels on the long edge will do, resolution is fine at 72.
How was this processed? LR or other...
The image that you have posted, will it be used for product advertising or is the image a photo ID or art work?
I ask because I think your intentions/needs change how one would help in critiquing the photo.